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I still have not my sketchbooks, but why not practice? <DD I need a little break from requests, and I finally found how to use skeleton in drawing (Here is this amazing step by step: [link] Go check it! Now! It's one of the best step by step I have ever seen and it's really helping!), so I practiced a bit
I know, every one looks a bit weird and curve... But I;m still practising poses, so please tell me what is good and what is wrong! It'll really
help X33
And sorry for taht it isn't clean at all, because I wanted to leave it sketchy XD Hope nobody maind XD Big sorry if I didn't erased all shade, taht my scanner do on my scans TToTT No, cleaning scanner not helping
And I'm waiting for critique!
I still have not my sketchbooks, but why not practice? <DD I need a little break from requests, and I finally found how to use skeleton in drawing (Here is this amazing step by step: [link] Go check it! Now! It's one of the best step by step I have ever seen and it's really helping!), so I practiced a bit
I know, every one looks a bit weird and curve... But I;m still practising poses, so please tell me what is good and what is wrong! It'll really help X33
And sorry for taht it isn't clean at all, because I wanted to leave it sketchy XD Hope nobody maind XD Big sorry if I didn't erased all shade, taht my scanner do on my scans TToTT No, cleaning scanner not helping
And I'm waiting for critique!
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This actually looks very good.
The critique I have are for the two in the middle.
#2's arms are wrong. Think of the arms as a cylinder, then wrap it in bracelets or slinkys, the arm on the left would have consistant downward lines (aka happy face lines
) because it's facing downwards. Joints don't change the direction of the wraps unless they are in different angle or space. Looking at the arm on the right, it's closer to the body. Anatomically the character is not lifiting it's arm. So if you pose the same pose with your body you should realize it's actually in the same directionas the arm in the left. So the lines would go one direction as well. Which is the smiley face line
At the moment are bent awkwardly. Especially the leg on the left. Depending on how you want to pose the legs. If one leg is suppose to be in the front and one in the back with a really big stand, then the on the left is suppose to have upwards line or frowny faces lines
from the hip to the angle. Because it's coming towards the viewer. The right leg is doing just right if you want the leg to be pushed back.
However, all that I've said are true from ground level eye view, but lines may change if you're looking up or looking down at a character. these observations i've made are strictly just looking straight at the character at ground level.
For #3 I'm not sure if you wanted the character to stand still or to have it bend at the knee. But if you want you character to stand still, the the whole body should have about the same curve lines which is happy face lines the reason for that is because the weight and muscle would be pull by the gravity which is pointing downwards, but when you bend at the knee area, the thighs come towards the viewer because you indicated a plane change, by showing opposite curve line directions. kind of like here: [link]
(I just realize you can totally wear a pair of stripped sox, and figure what I'm talking about and underestand it more. but my drawings are a bit extreme like i said in the notes. In real life these lines are really subtle.)
I hope that helps.
The critique I have are for the two in the middle.
#2's arms are wrong. Think of the arms as a cylinder, then wrap it in bracelets or slinkys, the arm on the left would have consistant downward lines (aka happy face lines
) because it's facing downwards. Joints don't change the direction of the wraps unless they are in different angle or space. Looking at the arm on the right, it's closer to the body. Anatomically the character is not lifiting it's arm. So if you pose the same pose with your body you should realize it's actually in the same directionas the arm in the left. So the lines would go one direction as well. Which is the smiley face line At the moment are bent awkwardly. Especially the leg on the left. Depending on how you want to pose the legs. If one leg is suppose to be in the front and one in the back with a really big stand, then the on the left is suppose to have upwards line or frowny faces lines
from the hip to the angle. Because it's coming towards the viewer. The right leg is doing just right if you want the leg to be pushed back. However, all that I've said are true from ground level eye view, but lines may change if you're looking up or looking down at a character. these observations i've made are strictly just looking straight at the character at ground level.
For #3 I'm not sure if you wanted the character to stand still or to have it bend at the knee. But if you want you character to stand still, the the whole body should have about the same curve lines which is happy face lines
the reason for that is because the weight and muscle would be pull by the gravity which is pointing downwards, but when you bend at the knee area, the thighs come towards the viewer because you indicated a plane change, by showing opposite curve line directions. kind of like here: [link](I just realize you can totally wear a pair of stripped sox, and figure what I'm talking about and underestand it more. but my drawings are a bit extreme like i said in the notes. In real life these lines are really subtle.)
I hope that helps.